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With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree course. To what extend do you agree?
Universities are not responsible for the overweight issue increasingly affecting nowadays population, hence making sport a mandatory module on degree courses cannot be expected from people. Sport is a wellness activity, and not a duty, which involves the implementation of physical energies, therefore students – and people in general – should have the freedom of choice as to whether practice a sport activity or focus their energies only on their studies.
It is well known the fact that sport is an extraordinary source of wellness, not only does the body benefit from the sport activities, but the mind also take advantages from them. This is the reason why sport cannot be transformed into a duty, it should maintain its precious value. In addition to what has been said, sport benefits unfortunately require the waste of physical energies which can increase the tiredness level of students and consequently impacting on their studies. For instance, after practicing sport activities, students might prefer to rest or sleep, instead of studying and preparing the classes that they will attend the day after. Thus, students should be free of choosing whether to do sports or use their energies for their studies.
To summarize, sport must keep its role of wellness activity and in order to guarantee its main characteristic, universities should not force their students to practice sport activities, but they should enable their students to choose and implement their energies in the way they want.